my cover/remix of JMJ

[ESI32]

its my first three cover/remix hope you enjoy.

and it would surely be nice with some feedback.

hope you enjoy.

Oxygene 8 remix
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nm6viMeIjL4

Second Rendez Vous Part 3 remix
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjCzzbWOSK0

Oxygene 8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fYDL1urw48o

[I Heart the Laser Harp]

I kinda like the first oxy 8 mix. However, since you started with the distorted JMJ intro to Odyssey, I expected a bit more use of it during the song. The high looped notes at the start could have been louder, to help set the foundation (It kind of gets left behind by the other layers). It's good though, with a good progression. I like your transitions between the "verse" and "chorus."

The Rendezvous 2:3 cover could have used more variation. It sounded like you were trying to change it up, but you just went back to the original theme. made it seem too timid for its powerful sounds. Of course, it's hard to go too wrong when you have the Synthex sounds.

The oxy 8 cover is precisely spot-on, though. I don't it could've sounded more like the original.

[ESI32]

thanks. I Heart the Laser Harp
YES it is a constructive feedback I can use since I am new to the profession. but I've tried to make them as simple as possible and I learn all the time. you are right almost all of your comment and I must say that you have a good ear. it must be said that I HAVE NOT downloaded midi files or copy paste everything is built up from scratch if anyone was in doubt. I take pride in listening to the original.

but many thanks for your opinion it means a lot.